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14 November 2006 @ 06:46 pm
 
Title: Autumn
Author: omen1x2
Rating: PG
Fandom: Pierrot
Pairing: Kirito x Jun
Summary: Kirito muses on the seasons as he walks home. Angsty drabble.




Autumn

By Omen-chan




Everyone says that winter is the season of death. But they're wrong. Autumn is the season when everything dies.

As the leaves change to their beautiful hues, they scream for help, scream because they're dying. But people only see their loveliness, their glorious shades.

Gold is the symbol for marriage.

It's also the color of their death.

Red is the color for passion.

Yellow is the color for eternal friendship.

I'm sure the leaves would appreciate dying in the name of relationships, passion, and friendship. It's a pity they don't know.



It's ironic to me that I lost Jun in the spring.

Perhaps he became tired of the colors of death (and love, and passion, and friendship), so he turned to the greens of life (and jealousy, and broken relationships).

And fertility, I remind myself.

I can't imagine Jun wanting children, but I do allow myself a small half smile at the picture of Jun pregnant.



I wish for the winter. For the whites and greys of blankness. And confusion.

And the dead bugs.



I continue walking home alone, crushing the dead leaves under my feet.




~fin~




I tried really, really hard to capture the intricacies in Kirito's character in just a few short lines here. With his poetic side, and his angsty side, and his odd sense of humor. I hope I did it okay.

Comment, please.
 
 
 
quill_chan on November 15th, 2006 01:31 am (UTC)
SAD. SO SAD.

It was delicious. Write more! XDDDD
Omen-chan: Kirito - Agitatoromen1x2 on November 15th, 2006 03:08 pm (UTC)
Thank you. ^___^

And I'll try.
kaseycleon on November 15th, 2006 04:54 am (UTC)
That was super good. And super depressing. I'm going to go find some candy or something to cheer me up... but good work! :D
Omen-chan: Miyavi02omen1x2 on November 15th, 2006 03:10 pm (UTC)
Yeah, while I was writing it at work, April was nice enough to get me a big strawberry-mango shake. Very yummy, very nice for depression drink.
Laren: emolaren on November 15th, 2006 05:02 am (UTC)
Kirito is such an emo kid. :(
I can really visualize this.
Omen-chan: Hilarious SID-ness XDomen1x2 on November 15th, 2006 03:11 pm (UTC)
Kirito is indeed emo boy. He should get the proper glasses, methinks. I mean, Jun's got emo glasses now, why not Kiri-chya?
finferwen: contemplativefinferwen on November 15th, 2006 05:24 am (UTC)
*wibble* T.T

That was beautiful.
Omen-chan: Pretty Kiri icon just for ME!omen1x2 on November 15th, 2006 03:13 pm (UTC)
Bleeding ear has stopped. *shrugs* I have no idea what was up with that.
Naoちゃん: Luvie Temari What Are You Looking Atsykem on November 15th, 2006 05:28 am (UTC)
*waves* LOOKIE!!! I READ IT!!!

^.^ it's really good and and and YAY!
Omen-chan: Junomen1x2 on November 15th, 2006 03:14 pm (UTC)
Ah, thankies. ^^
(Anonymous) on November 15th, 2006 06:48 am (UTC)
Sad. Very very sad, Katie. Can I take a guess and say that this had a little to do with what's been going on recently?

-shakes head- Anyway, I was just coming to check on you because I miss you. Email me sometime at miao_miso@yahoo.com and let me know what's going on.

Love you, miss you!

Naoran
Omen-chan: Angeloomen1x2 on November 15th, 2006 03:16 pm (UTC)
*hugs tightly* Yep, when depression rears its ugly head for more than five hours, I write angst like no one else can. Except Kirito. Kirito beats me at angst.

Love you too.
(no subject) - (Anonymous) on November 15th, 2006 11:56 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - omen1x2 on November 16th, 2006 03:55 am (UTC) (Expand)
(Anonymous) on November 15th, 2006 07:00 am (UTC)
I think you did an excellent job on Kirito's character. It's really angsty, which fits him too well, sadly.

Anyway, the "Harem" as you've so lovingly called us (haha) finally got internet access and email addies! You were the first person I thought of so here's mine: scratch_your_number@yahoo.com

Hopefully, I'll hear from you soon, yes?

Hiro
Omen-chan: Takeoomen1x2 on November 15th, 2006 03:18 pm (UTC)
*huuuuugs* ;_;

And just so you know, Miki gave you that nickname first. :p

Yeah, I'll try emailing you soon.
(no subject) - (Anonymous) on November 15th, 2006 11:58 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - omen1x2 on November 16th, 2006 03:56 am (UTC) (Expand)
Tsukushijuusuikan on November 15th, 2006 09:55 am (UTC)
Ngh nice to knows someone else, like Kata-chan, cares for meaning of colours.

It was beautiful dear.
Omen-chan: Aoi x Uruha Loveomen1x2 on November 15th, 2006 03:21 pm (UTC)
For about a year, I actually studied the meanings of colors, flowers, jewels and stones. Sadly, the only one that really stayed with me was the colors. I just rememver bits and pieces of the rest.

Thank you. ^^
On the 'net I go by either kiriga or tvecklingkiriga on November 15th, 2006 05:13 pm (UTC)
So short but so good! T.T I love the way you write Kirito, it fits very well. Hope you write more soon ^-^ And angst~ *angst-whore*
Omen-chan: Junomen1x2 on November 15th, 2006 09:29 pm (UTC)
Yay! New commenter! ♥

You know, I have a lot of old stuff that could use new readers. ^___^

*hinthinthint*
(no subject) - kiriga on November 15th, 2006 09:41 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - omen1x2 on November 15th, 2006 10:13 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - kiriga on November 16th, 2006 06:52 am (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - omen1x2 on November 16th, 2006 08:57 pm (UTC) (Expand)
Mizukikikai_no_yume on November 15th, 2006 05:58 pm (UTC)
I really like it. Its beautifull^^
You did great^^ i seriously like your writings^*hugs*
Omen-chan: Takeo02omen1x2 on November 15th, 2006 09:30 pm (UTC)
Thanks much. ^^
badurakku on November 15th, 2006 06:13 pm (UTC)
That was so sad, and yet, so beautiful. ;o; ♥
Omen-chan: Kirito in pretty colorsomen1x2 on November 15th, 2006 09:31 pm (UTC)
Thanks. ^^
pandamanium on November 16th, 2006 08:54 pm (UTC)
Fancy-ness. I like how you took the colors of autumn and spring and turned 'em around on us. Interesting thoughts.
Omen-chan: I love my fandom. ^___^omen1x2 on November 16th, 2006 08:59 pm (UTC)
Yes, go me.

*hugs tightly* Miki and I aren't talking to each other. It makes me wish that I hadn't moved; I really need someone to talk to.
(no subject) - pandamanium on November 16th, 2006 10:45 pm (UTC) (Expand)
yokozukiyokozuki on November 29th, 2006 04:31 am (UTC)
I like how you ended it especially...
Jun pregnant made me snorfle into my orange juice. x_x
It sounds almost ritualistic. The naming of the colors; the naming of the seasons.
Omen-chan: Aoi x Uruha Loveomen1x2 on November 30th, 2006 05:27 am (UTC)
*head tilt* Ritualistic? I was going more for symbolic, but I'll take what I can get. :P