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20 February 2006 @ 04:07 pm
O.O Lemon.  
Title: Fixing Myself
Author: Omen-chan
Rating: NC-17 (!)
Fandom: Pierrot (again…)
Pairing: Kirito x Jun (again…)
Summary: When Jun has a breakup, he always runs to Kirito immediately after. This is a take on why Jun always is really cold when he breaks up with someone. Angst. And romance.
Special Notes: For negiyou, who wanted “teeth shattering romance” and a lemon to show the other writers how Kirito x Jun lemons should be done.

Fixing Myself
By Omen-chan

Jun couldn’t feel anything. He never did. The girl was crying in front of him, tears falling shamelessly down her cheeks. He didn’t feel anything.

“Why?” Her question could barely be made out through her sobs and gasps. Jun knew what she had asked, anyway. They always asked the same thing.

“I don’t love you.” His voice was cold, emotionless.

“But we… But you… I thought we were meant to be together! I thought things were going great!”

Jun shrugged. He didn’t care. All he knew was that he just couldn’t take being in a relationship with her anymore. She was suffocating him.

“Again?” Kirito stared at Jun, shocked. “You were only going out with this one for two weeks!”

Jun hadn’t realized the time had been so short. It had felt like an eternity.

“What was wrong with this one?”

“She was too clingy.”

Kirito rolled his eyes. “They’re all too clingy. Or too open. Or too willing to have sex with you. Or not willing enough. Why can’t you ever stick with someone for more than a month?”

Jun shrugged and turned on Kirito’s television.

“Jun. I’m talking to you. Turn it off.”

Jun obeyed. He started playing around with the candles on Kirito’s coffee table.

“There has to be something else.”


“I don’t know. You need to figure it out.” He took the candles out of Jun’s hands and placed them back on the coffee table.

Jun stared down at his feet. I should get some new shoes… These are getting kind of ratty…

Kirito placed his hand under Jun’s chin and raised his face till Jun was looking at him.

“Why do you get into relationships when you know you hate them?”

Jun closed his eyes.

“It’s not a big deal, Kirito. Why are you making this into such a big deal?”

“If it’s not a big deal, why do you always come over here afterwards?”

Jun shrugged.

“It’s not to be comforted.”

Jun roughly moved his face out of Kirito’s grip.

Kirito grabbed Jun’s knee and leaned in closer. “Why won’t you ever look at me when you come over here after a break up?”

Jun leaned away.

Kirito sighed and pulled away. “You don’t know, do you?”

Jun winced and glanced up at him. “No, I don’t,” he whispered. You’re lying, some part of him deep down said to him. He pushed it away, as he had for years.

He didn’t even have to think about it anymore.

“Why?” she asked, voice barely audible between the sobs and the gasps.

The same script. The same routine.

“I don’t love you.”

She fell to the ground under the weight of her tears.

Jun began to walk away.

She started whispering something. He paused.

“I know you don’t.” Jun blinked. This wasn’t part of the routine. Her voice became stronger. “I know you don’t love me. I thought we could just fool around for a little bit.” She started yelling between her sobs. “I KNOW YOU DON’T LOVE ME!” Jun stared at her. “YOU LOVE HIM!” She stood up and started to run away.

He moved to grab her arm. “What are you talking about?”

She turned and slapped him.

Jun held a hand to his cheek, shocked.

“It’s bad enough,” she growled. “It’s bad enough that you’re in love with another man, but you don’t even realize it!” She started laughing hysterically. “Well, I’ll tell you! You’re in love with him, with that-that man-slut! Kirito!” She nearly spat out his name.

Jun’s eyes narrowed.


She stared at him, her hand holding her cheek, a perfect mirror of Jun moments before.

“Don’t ever,” Jun growled at her, “Don’t ever call Kirito that again.” His eyes nearly boring holes into hers with their intensity. “This fight is between us. Leave him out of it.”

She started laughing again. “Oh, but he is involved. He’s probably been involved in every relationship you’ve ever had.” She stopped laughing. Her grin turned malicious. “You don’t know, do you?”

“You don’t know, do you?”

“No, I don’t.”

Jun hadn’t gone to Kirito’s. He sat in the dark of his own apartment, alone.

She was wrong. It wasn’t true.

Jun fought against the rising tide of emotion, tried to push that part of him that said, It’s true. It’s always been true. You can’t hide forever into the back of his mind again.

It got harder and harder every time. But he’d succeed. He’d been doing it for ten years, and he could do it for ten more, if necessary.

You don’t know, do you?

No, I don’t.

Two days later, he still hadn’t left. He couldn’t leave. He couldn’t face the band until he had brought himself under control again.

He hadn’t slept. He hadn’t even eaten.

He sat on his couch and tried to fix himself again.

“Where have you been?”

Jun blinked and swam through his groggy thoughts to try and process the question.

“I’ve been here.”

A sudden noise, like someone was running. “Dammit, Jun! You look like hell! What happened?”

A warm hand on his forehead. “You’re freezing! Turn the heater up!”

Jun was about to reply that no, he was fine, go away, when he was suddenly lifted from the couch.


He drifted to sleep.

Kirito looked down at the form he had cradled in his arms. Damn it, Jun, what the fuck happened to you?

He turned to Takeo, who had just returned from turning on the heater. “Go get some food. I think he’s sick.”

Takeo left without a word. Kohta followed him.

Kirito then turned to Aiji. “Call a doctor.”

Aiji nodded and, sparing a quick, worried look at Jun, left also.

Jun blinked open his eyes. He was in his bed with every blanket he had piled on top of him. How had he gotten here?

“So you’re finally awake.”

Jun started and looked around, only to see Kirito sitting in a chair by his bed.

No! I’m not ready to face you yet!

Panicking, he moved to escape.

“Oh, no you don’t.” Kirito placed a firm hand on his shoulder. “The doctor said you weren’t getting up for another day, at least.”

Jun remained silent. He could feel Kirito’s hand through his shirt as if it were a fire brand. He tried to shrug it off.

Kirito’s eyes narrowed. “The doctor said you weren’t eating properly. He said you probably hadn’t slept in days.”

Jun stared down at his hands.

“What happened? You were fine on Tuesday when we were practicing… Did something happen after that?”

Jun blinked. That’s right, he hadn’t told Kirito.

Kirito growled and grabbed Jun’s chin, forcing him to look up. “What happened?”

Jun whispered something. Kirito leaned in closer. “What? I couldn’t-”

“We broke up.”

Kirito leaned away, shocked. “You and- what’s her name? Aiko?”

“Reiko,” Jun corrected him automatically.

Kirito nodded and sat next to Jun, pulling him into his arms. “I’m sorry.”

Jun tried not to relax into Kirito’s embrace. Tried to pull away. “For what?”

Kirito’s arms tightened around him, not letting Jun break away from him. “Well, you must have loved her a lot, if her breaking up with you has affected you this much.”

Jun shook his head. “No. I broke up with her.”

“Then why?”

Jun tried to pull away again.

“Stop it. Tell me what’s wrong.”

Jun was silent. His mind felt like it was deep in murky waters. He didn’t even know if anything was wrong.

Kirito began rubbing Jun’s back comfortingly.

Jun buried his head in Kirito’s chest. “Stop that.”

Kirito paused. “Stop what?”

“Stop being so nice to me.”

Kirito opened his mouth to answer, but apparently Jun wasn’t finished yet. “I haven’t fixed myself. Don’t be nice to me. She said I wasn’t in love with her.”

Kirito remained silent.

“You’re wrong. You’re WRONG!” Jun’s voice was muffled by Kirito’s shirt. “I can’t be in love. I can’t!”


“He’ll hate me! I don’t want him to hate me! I’m always there for him, and he’s always there for me! That’s how it is! That can’t change! I don’t want it to change!”

Kirito held Jun tighter.

“I go out with girls because I don’t want it to change! I break up with them because I don’t want it to change! I want us to STAY THE SAME!”

Kirito leaned down to whisper in Jun’s ear. “Are you sure?”

Jun nodded.

“You really don’t want anything to change?”

Another nod.

“You don’t want to wake up next to the person, or kiss them good-night? You don’t want to have someone waiting for you when you go home?”

Jun reached up to wrap his arms around Kirito’s waist. “Why should it change? It’s perfect just the way it is.”

“Then why are you so miserable?”

Jun tensed. “I don’t know.”

“Why can’t you look me in the eye?”

“I don’t know.”

Kirito pushed Jun back and straddled him. “Why are you always so cold when you break up with someone?”

Jun kept his eyes tightly shut. “I don’t know.”

Kirito leaned in, his lips almost touching Jun’s. “Why can’t you kiss me?”

Jun began to tremble. “I don’t know.”

Kirito placed a gentle kiss on Jun’s trembling lips. “Why can’t you tell me that you love me?”

A tear rolled down Jun’s cheek. “I don’t know,” he whispered.

Kirito moved a hand to start caressing Jun’s cheek. “Yes, you do.”

Jun opened his eyes.

“You want to wake up next to me.”


“You want to kiss me good-night.”


Kirito caressed Jun’s lips with his hand. “You want to tell me that you love me.”

Jun tentatively reached up and pulled Kirito closer. “Yes.”

“Then tell me.”

“I love you,” he whispered.

Kirito smiled. “Say it again.”

“I love you,” he repeated, voice stronger.

Kirito kissed him. “I love you, too.”

They kissed for several minutes, tongues fighting a battle that neither could really lose.

Jun broke away. And rolled the two of them over so that he was straddling Kirito.

“You knew,” he said, kissing Kirito’s neck.

“Yes.” Kirito moved to give Jun more access.

“You always know.” He began sucking on it.


Jun grinned and bit him lightly. Kirito’s hips bucked.

Jun pulled away. “It would have been so much easier if you’d have just pushed me down.”

Kirito glared at him. “I would never-”

Jun leaned down and kissed him full on the mouth.

Kirito’s arms reached up and pulled Jun down so that their bodies were flush against each other. And rolled them over again.

Kirito’s lips moved from Jun’s to start nipping at the skin on Jun’s neck.

Jun writhed underneath him. “Uuhh… Kirito…”

Kirito’s hand began to wander down Jun’s body.



“Are you… okay? With this?” His hand had stopped on Jun’s zipper.

Hai…” Jun reached up to yank Kirito’s shirt away. He spared a moment, staring at Kirito through lust-filled eyes. “You’re too thin…”

Kirito grinned and unbuttoned Jun’s shirt. “I’m not the one who hasn’t eaten in two days.” He paused, his hand on Jun’s zipper again. “Maybe we should have you eat first.”

Jun’s eyes shot open and glared at him. “Don’t. You. Even. Think. About. Stopping.”

Kirito didn’t have a chance to reply before Jun had reached over to unzip Kirito’s pants.

“Fine,” he said, and leaned down to kiss Jun thoroughly, unzipping Jun’s pants as he did so.

Jun moaned into Kirito’s mouth as Kirito took him into his hand.

Kirito wrenched his mouth away. “You always have to be so difficult…”

Jun moaned, only half listening.

“We could have been doing this for years.”

Jun arched, wanting more.

“But you had to make things harder.”

Kirito began to caress Jun’s hair with his other hand. Jun was getting close.

“I love you.”

Jun nearly screamed from the sensory overload.

“I’ve loved you since that day I met you in the bar.”

Jun climaxed, arching into Kirito’s hand.

“And I’ve loved you more and more every day since.”

Kirito gazed down at Jun’s drowsy face.

“I hated seeing you with anyone else.”

Jun smiled lazily and reached up to pull Kirito down, covering him.

“I know. That’s why I always went out with them.”


*Omen stares at what she’d just written* I... did… a lemon…

Okay, so that was my first lemon. Ever. Keep that in mind while you’re reviewing.

And I really hope you liked it. I’m not that good at serious fics OR lemons, so I’m not quite sure if this turned out all right.

And, wow Jun. Ten years of denial. That can’t be healthy.
Current Mood: shockedshocked
Current Music: L'Arc en Ciel - Caress of Venus
Ray Hino Murataloucanet_ray on February 20th, 2006 10:39 pm (UTC)
*________________* Should I say anything?
I mean ~ It's adorable <3
Even it's your first lemon, I always rather shounen-ai stories than those hard lemon ones ~ And I like yours <333333333 *-*
*hugs* KiriJun is everythiiiiing <3333333 !! You _are_ great! Keep writtiiiiiiing *-* Keep making my days wonderful after reading your fics =)

~Ray H. Murata
Omen-chanomen1x2 on February 21st, 2006 12:20 am (UTC)
Don't worry! I shall!

And let me tell you, I was so seriously worried about how this fic would be taken. Humor is what I'm best at, and this didn't have ANY.

I'm also really happy you liked my lemon. I think I was blushing the whole time I was writing it.
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sakito whorenyaxchan on February 20th, 2006 10:47 pm (UTC)
:: DROOLS :: SU...GO....I....... :: tries to regain composure :: sugoi sugoi sugoi!! Kirito and Jun is such a good slash :: sighs :: I hope you write more stories soon! I'll be looking for them!
Omen-chanomen1x2 on February 21st, 2006 12:22 am (UTC)
Yay! I have another new fan! And go read my other stuff too! They're humor (this was my first really serious ficcie), and they're a lot shorter too.

And, of course, all Kirito x Jun because there isn't enough of it in the world.
Tsukushijuusuikan on February 20th, 2006 11:16 pm (UTC)
I still need to digest it.
Too good!
Omen-chanomen1x2 on February 21st, 2006 12:23 am (UTC)
Okay! Once you've digested it, tell me what you liked! Or didn't like! I want to know!

Besides, I never write stuff like this. I want to know if I should keep doing it. My stuff's always humor.
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Sue: KiriJunnegiyou on February 20th, 2006 11:24 pm (UTC)
*speechless* uhm I don't know what to say...
you know this feeling, when you read something and you got the feeling, that while reading some special phrases, your chest contracts and your heart somehow....aches? I had this feeling so very often during this FF... and I loved every part of it!!!!
this has been the first time somebody wrote something for me and and... I was happy just because of that, but now... I'm so damn damn happy and... it's so cool!!!!!
I liked the soft lemon, too... though I normally don't like this "hey, were a couple for two minutes already, so...fancy a fuck?" but this is okay I think...

aaaaw I could write an essay about this one! I so damn like, no, LOVE the way you wrote about how Jun hid and denied his feelings, the way he acted towards Kirito is so... well, as I said about your earlier FFs, it really could have been that way, they ARE somehow like that, you managed to fit their characters so well again! I could imagine how he was looking at him and and....

well, I think I start getting all too hyper >.< sorry^^"

As I said: I love it! I really really do, and I hope so much that this isn't the last serious FF (nor Lemon) you wrote!
100points and some loads of cookies, and my deepest thanks for this one!
Sue: KiriJunnegiyou on February 20th, 2006 11:44 pm (UTC)
aaaah, I gave the link to my FF-buddy and beloved brother and she was as stunned as I was... we swooned over some scenes and I think I should write this donw so:

-Jun always trying to avoid being touched by Kirito, the way he avoids his gaze... this is so so so ... don't know, it's just cool! For I think we all know situations in wich we just want to run and hide but we simply CAN'T because, actually we WANT the other person to care...

-the scene where he slaped that girl... I was all like O.O Woah! Jun in Kirito-defensive mood is SO great, I think that's his strenght, and THAT'S where he feels something, in contrast to numbness while breaking up with her.

-while confronting Jun, Kirito is not letting go of him, he doesn't give him a chance to back out again, and Jun is so... I don't know, struck? that he can't say something other than "I don't know", for he DOES know, and at the same time he doesn't and that's just SO cool, I've been in this kind of situations time and again, you don't know why, but somehow, at the same time, you know it, maybe you just don't want to know...

saa~ I keep interpreting something into this and... maybe you're already fallen down from your chair, laughing at what this silly girl thinks while reading your FF... I'm sorry, I just can't help it, and I hate myself for my english, since I don't think I can truly express myself, plus it's already damn late and my brain is out of order.......sorry^^"
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a_k_i_y_a on February 20th, 2006 11:33 pm (UTC)
WHOA [*o*] ♥
Omen-chanomen1x2 on February 21st, 2006 12:24 am (UTC)
You likey? Yes? *is all hopeful and giving out puppy eyes*
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pandamanium on February 21st, 2006 01:57 am (UTC)
WOO! Katie's lemon-virginity has been taken!! Let's throw a party! *confetti*
Lovely! It was very sexy, and very in-character. I love how you wrote the sex too, it wasn't obscene at all, just hawt. Hee!
Omen-chanomen1x2 on February 21st, 2006 02:11 am (UTC)
Hee! Thanks! And yay! PARTY!

I'm so glad you liked my lemon! I've never written anything more difficult. It took me about an hour just to write the short little sex scene because I kept having to walk away from my computer thinking, "How am I ever going to be able to post this?"
MissLelizmissleliz on February 21st, 2006 02:59 am (UTC)
Oooh. That was really good. I loved:
“I hated seeing you with anyone else.”

“I know. That’s why I always went out with them.”
^^ That made me smile. Jun...ten years of denial. XDD Kirito reaaally should have informed Jun that Jun was in love with Kirito about 9 and a half years ago. XD (I had to use all names in that sentence...too confusing with just "him"s. XDD)

I didn't expect something like this when all your other fics have been comedies, but it was still wonderful and had all the fluff at the end that I wanted. Another great job! ^^
Omen-chanomen1x2 on February 21st, 2006 05:27 am (UTC)
Yay!!! Thank you!

Kirito reaaally should have informed Jun that Jun was in love with Kirito about 9 and a half years ago. <<< As for that, I think Kirito was more than willing until Jun was ready to face it. He probably decided in the end to just force Jun to see it because Jun had made himself sick.
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my_demon_diarymy_demon_diary on February 21st, 2006 03:12 am (UTC)

if I had been Kirito, I would trow Jun down on the bed and had my wicked ways with him years ago. but at least he can do so now...you go stud "host"
Omen-chanomen1x2 on February 21st, 2006 05:28 am (UTC)
You likey, then? *hopes hopes hopes*
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kyuichi18 on February 21st, 2006 04:37 am (UTC)
Hey sweet bundle *glompglomp* ^~^ Love it <333 Kawaii <33

And, wow Jun. Ten years of denial. That can’t be healthy. <<< Poor thing... must be really sexually frustrated nihahaha ^^''

Kirito glared at him. “I would never-” <<< Dang, what a babe <333333 *_*

Jun’s eyes shot open and glared at him. “Don’t. You. Even. Think. About. Stopping.” <<< *_* I love this kind of Jun

“I know. That’s why I always went out with them.” <<< *squeals!!!*
Omen-chanomen1x2 on February 21st, 2006 05:30 am (UTC)
Me so happy you liked! *huggles*
And just for a side note about the ending: Kirito had finally forced Jun to open his eyes, and at some point Jun realized that was the reason he'd had so many relationships. I think some part of him wanted Kirito to wake him up.
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Lizardmalikyiaue on February 21st, 2006 05:14 am (UTC)
I really liked the script type style of this fic. It wasn't heavy paragraphs (though don't get me wrong, I definitly can love those too, and lots), but it still managed to convey images, or at least the feelings of a situation.

As for the lemon -- It wasn't very descriptive, which is a typical rule for writing a lemon, so I don't know if I would exactly call it that, because though they did have sex, it wasn't really graphic, but I did like the way you wrote it. I did an AijixKirito fic for a challenge with a similar type of sexual situation, and I find that I can really enjoy these hinted kind of 'you have to guess' type of sex scenes, because the genre gets so overwhelmed with hot and heavy sex.
Omen-chanomen1x2 on February 21st, 2006 05:33 am (UTC)
My style tends to go more toward simple format with complex meanings, especially for Kirito x Jun, because I think that's a great description of their relationship too.

And I know my lemon is really just yummy citrus lime, but I don't think I'll ever be able to write anything more descriptive (seriously, it took me an hour to write that short, simple little scene).
Shiumishiumi on February 21st, 2006 05:37 am (UTC)
love!Love!Love! thanku for the amazing story!
Omen-chanomen1x2 on February 21st, 2006 05:43 am (UTC)
Yay! Another review of happiness! If you have the time, could you tell me what you liked? Or didn't like?

*omen is a comment whore*
akyoakyo on February 21st, 2006 09:25 am (UTC)
Found it only because it was linked to Negiyous LJ...
I must admit that i was never a fan of Pierrot although I liked them all along.
I must also admit that i do not read a lot of Fanfics because moste of the stuff i find is horrible.....but this need little story again taught me something better. There is a lot of nice stuff out there and this one definatly belongs to them.

1) can't say much about how close you sticked to the characters since i do not know them well enough, but you nicely sticked trough out the story to clearly visible character traits!!!!!
2) It is realy romantic with out any flower, heart etc shit!!! Most writers are not able to accomplish that.
3) I like the rising in emotional tension between them alot, since it was more done in between the lines instead of described in long paragraphs.
4) Also nice way of letting time passe buy repeating the break-up szene in the front!!!!
5) nice little lemon!!!! not to much but just the right amount! Although they are just "together" for like some minutes, but the fact, that they both knew, more or less consciuos, for a long time justifies the whole thing nicely!!!

this is it...i hope i was not to weared in describing my points...just one last thing to say!

I REALY REALY REALY REALY REALY LIKE THIS NEED LITTLE STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Omen-chanomen1x2 on February 21st, 2006 03:51 pm (UTC)
*looks at long review* YES! I love long reviews. The more I have to go on, the better.

And if I can get more people into this fandom... *looks toward the sun dramatically*

Oh, and I'm so glad you liked it. Serious stuff isn't really what I do...
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aliale on February 21st, 2006 10:37 am (UTC)

you know....I think I'll stop writing Pierrot fics, and leave them to you....

but OMG that was...
is I mean...


diffrent from what you already made me used to, but owh sooooo good non the less *_*

you own me.
Sue: aggronegiyou on February 21st, 2006 12:03 pm (UTC)
(sorry to interrupt but.......... DON'T YOU DARE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *runs away hiding*)
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mturarachu__ on February 21st, 2006 12:33 pm (UTC)
so, I got here through negiyous add XD'

I liked it. at first I thought 'huh she's rushing a bit, everything was much too fast and the idea of sontantly-changing-girlsfriends-jun was kinda weird at first but, okay^^)

their dialogue right before the lemon scene is just lovely! *0*

I commented. XDD'
Omen-chanomen1x2 on February 21st, 2006 03:38 pm (UTC)
Yay! Commentness!

The whole Jun with his girlfriends thing wasn't made up. This is something Kirito actually mentions in an interview.
(no subject) - turarachu__ on February 21st, 2006 04:08 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - omen1x2 on February 21st, 2006 04:13 pm (UTC) (Expand)
☆~アンニ~★: KxJni_ya_naito on February 21st, 2006 04:29 pm (UTC)
WOW!!! Just wow!!
Really amazing!! Your first lemon turned out SO GOOD!!
But Jun hit a girl..thats not like God of Cuteness /copyright Omen-chan/...
but the whole styr was great!! I LOVE IT!! ♥
Omen-chan: Miyavi - Sexy...omen1x2 on February 21st, 2006 04:36 pm (UTC)
Well... You know... bad-mouthing Kirito would raise Jun's hackles, methinks. Kirito's not the only protective/possessive one.
(no subject) - ni_ya_naito on February 21st, 2006 04:41 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - omen1x2 on February 21st, 2006 04:51 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - ni_ya_naito on February 21st, 2006 04:54 pm (UTC) (Expand)
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