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16 February 2006 @ 12:39 am
Another Pierrot fanfic  
Title: Shittobukai
Author: omen1x2
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: Pierrot
Pairing: Kirito x Jun
Summary: Kirito gets jealous of Rill. How cute. I love writing Kirito pouty and in denial, even if it’s only semi-denial. This one’s more angst and fluff than humor this time around. It’s a lot slashier, too.
Notes: Since my other Pierrot fic got such great comments (happy, happy Omen!), I decided to go ahead and write another one.



Shittobukai
By Omen


Kirito sat back on the sofa, trying his damnedest to quell the rising surge of jealousy. It was ridiculous, it was unnecessary, and it was beneath him. He was much too cool and collected to let such a tiny thing get to him.

Jun had not even looked at him.

Not that that, you know, had anything to do with it. He was just annoyed that his self-sacrificing efforts to keep himself from being too antisocial were being disregarded. It had nothing to do with the fact that Jun was giving all of his attention to someone else.

A cat.

Kirito watched as Jun played with his cat, rolling around on the floor. His eyes narrowed as he noticed that Jun had apparently completely forgotten his presence.

Damn it, he was the one that invited me here. Giving me all that rubbish about me being a hermit. I’m not a hermit, I just want to stay at home.

I suppose it need not be said that at home, Kirito had his own forms of entertainment (i.e. porn), and none of them consisted of being ignored.

“Are you hungry?”

“Uh. Yes?”

Jun looked up. “Oh, I wasn’t talking to you, Kirito! I just remembered that I didn’t have time to feed Rill this morning. She’s probably hungry.”

Kirito tried not to pout.

“But I’ll make you something too!”

“Don’t bother.” The attempt failed.

Jun’s eyes widened. “Kirito? Daijobu desu ka?”

Iie.” Kirito tried to suppress mental images of himself as a five year old. He had been a remarkably bratty five year old.

Jun gave him a strange look and walked to the kitchen.

Rill jumped onto the couch and glared at Kirito.

Kirito glared back.

Kirito sat there staring down a cat for two whole minutes before he decided that he either needed to leave, or he would probably end up killing Jun’s cat. Not because he was jealous or anything. He just didn’t like having things glare at him. Even if it was just a cat.

Besides, he had a feeling killing Rill would put Kirito on Jun’s “Naughty” list. And there was no having fun with Jun when Jun was upset.

Before Kirito could move away, Rill swiped at him with her claws.

Definitely time to leave.

Kirito moved toward the door. He’d apologize to Jun for leaving without saying good-bye later. When he’d have Jun’s full attention.

“Kirito?”

Then again…

Kirito turned to find Jun standing in the doorway of the living room with two plates of food in his hands.

Doko e ikun desu ka?”

It was really hard to be mean to Jun when he was looking at you like a little lost puppy.

“I made you something to eat.”

Jun was really good at giving guilt trips without ever even realizing it.

Kirito decided to give as good as he got. “I just got bored.”

Okay, so he needed to work on his guilt trips a little more. Not exactly sorrow inducing, that.

Jun looked stricken. “Gomen!” Oh well, it seemed to have worked anyway. “I just haven’t been able to spend time with Rill lately. We’re always on the road.”

“Then spend the day with your cat. I’m going home.” Kirito turned to go. Some part of him wondered when he had learned to be such a bastard. The rest of him shrugged.

Matte o, Kirito!” Kirito heard a loud crash, and suddenly two pairs of arms appeared around his waist.

Kirito blinked down at his two new appendages. “Hanase o.”

Yadda.”

Jun directly disobeying an order from Kirito was new. Kirito vaguely wondered if he’d pushed Jun too far with his last prank. (Come on, like he was really going to push Jun off a cliff… Honestly, it was just an excuse to grope him, really.)

“Jun…” Funny… That didn’t come out sounding threatening at all. Kirito wondered where all his anger went.

“You don’t talk to me anymore,” Jun said against his back. “I want you to talk to me.”

“I talk to you every day. Usually more than once. In fact, our conversations usually start with ‘Ohayou’ and end with ‘Oyasumi.’” Despite his best efforts, Kirito started relaxing into Jun’s embrace.

Jun’s arms loosened when he sensed that Kirito wasn’t trying to get away. “You know what I mean.”

Kirito leaned back, slightly. “No, I don’t.”

Jun rested his head on Kirito’s shoulder. “Lately, you’ve been talking with Aiji more than me,” he mumbled into the vicinity of Kirito’s collar bone.

“I don’t talk with anyone more than I talk with you. I couldn’t get rid of you with a crowbar.” He grinned. “Now there’s an idea.”

Jun bit Kirito’s neck. Hard. “I’m being serious, Shinya.”

“I hate that name, Junichi.”

“Do I look like I care? And it’s true, you know,” he breathed into Kirito’s neck.

Okay, Kirito had completely lost the thread of conversation.

“What’s true?”

“You talk to Aiji more than me.” Even without looking, Kirito could hear the pout in Jun’s voice.

Little light bulbs turned on all around his head.

“Jun.”

“I’m not letting you go.”

“No, that’s not what I mean.”

“Then what?”

Jun wa shittobukai ka?”

A short pause. “No.”

Hontou desu ka?”

Jun released him. “If you’re going to be an ass about it, you can just leave.”

Kirito turned and looked at him.

“It sounds like you’re jealous.”

Jun glared at him. “Shinya… Ore no shittobukai janai.” He stepped away from Kirito to get more space between them. “You’re really pissing me off.”

Kirito closed the distance again. “Then what’s the problem? Did I hit a nerve?”

Jun stepped away again. And onto the plates of food he’d dropped.

“ITAI!”



Kirito kneeled in front of the sofa, bandaging Jun’s feet.

Itte, itte, itte.”

Urusai.”

Jun glared at him. “This is all your fault, you know.”

“How is this my fault? You’re the one who dropped the plates.”

“I wouldn’t have stepped on them if you-” Jun cut himself off abruptly.

“If I what?”

Nan demo nai.”

Kirito rolled his eyes. “I think Rill’s eating that food you dropped.”

NANI?” Jun immediately started to stand. When he put all of his weight on his wounded feet, he immediately fell back onto the couch.

Itte…

Baka. I’ll go get her. You stay here.”

Hai…

Kirito walked over to the genkan and glared at the cause of all this mischief.

She glared back at him, a quiet hiss emerging from her throat.

Kirito’s mind provided an image of one of those old Western-style movies from America. What did they call this? Sho-daunu?

After a few short minutes, Kirito decided that balking showed weakness of character. He hated showing weakness.

He picked her up. Ignoring the hisses, screeches, and claws to the face, he took her to Jun’s bathroom. Grinning triumphantly, he shut the door.

He then went back to clean up the broken, bloody dinner.

He looked down at it. I bet it’s still better than Aiji’s cooking…



Jun sat pouting on the couch. It just figured. Here he was, injured, immobile, and Kirito was ignoring him. He’d been sitting there alone for half an hour! How long did it take to get Rill away from the food?

Jun’s righteous anger balloon immediately deflated when another, more likely idea occurred to him.

Maybe he just left…

Jun felt tears welling up in his eyes. Maybe he really doesn’t care about me anymore. Maybe I really am scared of losing his love. Maybe I already have.

A sudden noise from behind him made him turn to look toward the kitchen. Kirito stood in the doorway, looking a little sheepish.

“I’m sorry I made you drop your food. I made you some more.”

Jun stared at him, shocked, tears still in his eyes.

“Jun? Daijobu?” Kirito rushed over to him. “Kureshii?”

“I thought you left,” Jun said in a small voice, looking down at his hands. I feel like such an idiot now. Kirito’s going to think I’m such and idiot for crying. Now he really will leave. Jun’s mind, once it starts down the path of depressing thoughts, won’t leave until someone yanks him off the road before an oncoming vehicle hits him.

Luckily, Kirito was one of the few people that knew this.

He sat down on the couch and pulled Jun into his arms. “Baka,” he murmured into Jun’s hair, “Hontou ni baka da you. I’m not going anywhere. You know we’ll always be together. Haven’t I always said that?”

Jun curled into Kirito’s chest. “You hate it when I cry.”

“Of course I do. I like Jun best when he’s happy.”

Jun sighed happily and closed his eyes.

Kirito looked down at him. Jun was obviously beginning to doze. Should I wake him? Is he still hungry? Would I piss him off too terribly much if I drew pictures on his face? Kirito had a pen in his pocket, and his fingers itched to play merry mischief on Jun’s sleeping face.

You really are scared. Daijobu. Boku mo.

Kirito planted a soft kiss in Jun’s hair, and slowly began to fall asleep.



Fin



I don’t know what it is about a cuddling Kirito and Jun, but the imagery just can’t seem to leave me. So, once again, I end the fic with the two of them cuddling in their sleep.

Special Notes: I wanted to portray Kirito and Jun as people who are almost always on the same wavelength. They can hold two different conversations at a time, one with their words, the other with their bodies (body language, you perverts). When they start to argue, they’re no longer on the same wavelength, and that’s when they start to have problems communicating.

Translation Notes: Okay, this time I used more complex wording, because I found the Japanese terms much more elegant and fitting for the context.

Shittobukai: A word for jealous, but with the context that means less “envious” and more emphasis on “fearful of losing one’s love.”
Daijobu desu ka? and its shorter form daijobu are simply ways of asking “Are you all right/hurt?” As if you didn’t know that.
Iie: “No.”
Doko e ikun desu ka?: “Where are you going?” Jun is using the polite/formal way of speaking because he’s hurt.
Gomen: “Sorry.” This is another one that everyone knows.
Matte o!: “Wait!”
Hanase o: “Let go.”
Yadda: Can also be spelled as “Iia da.” It’s a stronger term than “no.” Sort of like “absolutely not.”
The ohayou/oyasumi line: Kirito is basically saying that he greets Jun with “Good morning,” and parts with “Good night.” In other words, they spend the whole day together.
Shinya is Kirito’s real name, as Junichi is Jun’s.
Hontou desu ka?: “Really?”
Ore no shittobukai janai: Basically, Jun is denying that he’s jealous.
Itai and itte: “Ow.” Poor Jun got hurt.
Urusai: “Shut up.” Since Jun’s hurt, I’m assuming that Kirito is saying it without any rancor, so it would be more like “be quiet.”
Nan demo nai: “Nothing.”
Nani?: “What?” I hate translating the ones that have absolutely no need for translating, but if its worth doing right…
Baka: “Idiot.”
Hai: “Yes.” Jun’s basically obeying Kirito’s order to stay put.
Genkan: The entranceway to any Japanese home or apaato (apartment). Where you take off your shoes.
Sho-daunu: Kirito’s thinking of the term “showdown.” Engrish is fun!
I bet it’s still better than Aiji’s cooking…: I’m not being mean. Aiji’s well known for his horrible cooking.
Kureshii: “Are you in pain?”
Boku mo: Kirito’s basically saying that he’s scared of losing Jun’s love too. Aaawww…
 
 
Current Mood: satisfiedsatisfied
Current Music: Pierrot - Kowareteiku kono sekai de
 
 
 
aliale on February 16th, 2006 07:37 am (UTC)
*pats*
ok you own me *ads to mems and is a happy bunny*
gosh, what a good way to start the day ^^ I seriously love those two fics, even if I'm not the biggest fan of Kirito x Jun XD

Omen-chanomen1x2 on February 16th, 2006 07:49 am (UTC)
*preens*
You are SO my favorite reviewer! And not many people are big fans of the Kirito x Jun pairing... *sighs unhappily* I'm really just trying to get more people into it, 'cause they're so CUTE!
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Sue: KiriJunnegiyou on February 16th, 2006 11:50 am (UTC)
Okay~
first off: I'm happy to read more from you, I think you're a good author. I had fun reading this, The image of Kirito vs. Rill during their deathglare-contest is just piceless XDDD I need to get used to the idea of Kirito watching porn, though... not sure why.

but uhm... I'm not good in Japanese, and scrolling downevery time to read the translation is somewhat tiring and it's hard to find back into the feeling I got while reading the story. One I started reading, I want to read on smoothly, without being interrupted by tiny questionmarks flying around ma head. So, is there really the need to use complete japanese phrases? If you say: "fuck yourself, learn japanese of get lost I don't care" it's okay, I won't stop reading your stories non the less, but as I said, it makes it harder for somebody who really really wants to read and loves the way you write, but always has to stop because I'm not sure if I know what that means...
Omen-chanomen1x2 on February 16th, 2006 03:24 pm (UTC)
Thanks for the comment! I'll definitely try something different for the translations next time. I want to keep using Japanese text, though, because like I said earlier, I think the Japanese terms are more elegant and they fit the piece more.

P.S. I adore your icon.
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Niimura Shinya: Kao 01niimura_shinya on February 16th, 2006 03:11 pm (UTC)
You are right, there's not enough Kirito X Jun fanfictions out there ^^

I like your works, even though the Japanese can be tricky since I don't really know it. I know I should learn it, but well. I'm lazy.

*Wishes for more nice Kirito X Jun fanfics !!*
Omen-chanomen1x2 on February 16th, 2006 03:27 pm (UTC)
Me want more Kiri x Jun, damn it!

Until more people start noticing this pairing (check out my livejournal for my full rantage on that), I'm going to be churning out my Kirito x Jun like there's no freaking tomorrow.
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Ray Hino Murataloucanet_ray on February 17th, 2006 12:10 pm (UTC)
Another great fanfic *___* Oh my god! You just made my day wonderful!((Actually, I was alrealdy more than happy. And, after reading this, can you imagine my grin right now? xD))
*___* KiriJun is lovely <3 More people should right fics with the pairing... But at least KiriJun does have great ficwritters like you!!! *-*~! ♥
Thaaank you for sharing that *-*
~Ray H. Murata
Omen-chanomen1x2 on February 17th, 2006 05:00 pm (UTC)
And I'll keep writing it while I have great reviewers like you! Seriously, nothing makes me happier than pretty comments.

I'm SO glad you liked it! I was actually kind of worried about it, 'cause I'm a lot better at humor usually...
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kyuichi18 on February 19th, 2006 03:44 pm (UTC)
“Lately, you’ve been talking with Aiji more than me,” <<< Awwwww >~<

This is sooo cute!! I really love it!!! I love the jealousy~!! I absolutely love Kirito/Jun *melts and melts*~~!!! I just AWWW >~< *cannot express self* I love youuu!!! <3 heehee ^^''
Omen-chanomen1x2 on February 19th, 2006 03:58 pm (UTC)
Thank you! *feels all warm and fuzzy inside*

And just for that awesome review... *adds kyuichi*
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☆~アンニ~★ni_ya_naito on February 19th, 2006 04:12 pm (UTC)
GOMEN for my sooooo late comment!! -bowsbows-

Another terribly cute fic!!
My fav part was "Would I piss him off too terribly much if I drew pictures on his face?"
Really!! Where do you get your ideas??? *___*
Omen-chanomen1x2 on February 19th, 2006 04:16 pm (UTC)
It's okay! *gives huggles because she loves giving huggles*

And you're the first person to mention the bit with Kirito writing on Jun's face! Thank you! That was, personally, my favorite part too.

And in answer to your question, I have little Kiritos and Juns running around my head constantly doing fun things with each other. They're awesome muses and keep me happy, but I never get any sleep!
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MissLelizmissleliz on February 21st, 2006 03:11 am (UTC)
Very cute! XDD I love Jun's cat. I love the fact that Rill and Kirito got in a glaring match. XDDD Wonderful fic as usual.

"Besides, he had a feeling killing Rill would put Kirito on Jun’s “Naughty” list." Loved that. XDD *pictures Jun writing up a Naughty list - "Kirito - killed cat. No sex for a year." XDDD

Like the other reviewers though, I also had a problem with the Japanese. ^^;; Not because I couldn't understand it - I'm in third year and I understood everything perfectly well - it just didn't seem to flow as well. I felt like it should either all be in Japanese or all be in English...one or two words is fine, but half and half just seemed kind of...choppy. ^^;; Not to be critical; it was still a wonderful fic! Just thought I'd mention it. ^^;;
Omen-chanomen1x2 on February 21st, 2006 05:41 am (UTC)
*bursts out laughing* No sex for a year... just classic... Oh that was beautiful.

And thanks for the language comment too. (I was seriously beginning to wonder if no one knew Japanese anymore)

I think what kind of made that seem choppy was that I really did think certain terms were more fitting for the context, but I did realize that not a lot of people would understand it, so I kind of halved it.

That and, well, I'm lazy and I didn't want to have a bigger translating section than necessary.
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Omen-chanomen1x2 on March 8th, 2006 05:33 am (UTC)
Okay. The story behind the Japanese in this fic is this:
I remembered the term "shittobukai," and I loved the subtle meanings behind it, so I decided to use it.
But I really didn't want to just pop one Japanese term in, so I used more. Because once I start, I just can't stop. You know, like Pringles.
And the idea for having the translation right after is great, except for the fact that I can't explain the subtext to certain words in something like that... and I love explaining certain terms, because the Japanese have so many different ways to express the simplest thing. They don't just say "jealous." Depending on which term you use, it can be construed as many different kinds of jealousy in only one word.
And I usually don't show off my language knowledge in my fics, because I know many people don't know as much as I do, so I generally just use English.
And I considered just using "sho-daun." For a split second. But it sounded much too choppy, and Japanese has a very liquid sound to it. That and they don't have hard "n's," so when they use Engrish, they don't end it on an "n" very often, because to them, our hard "n's" are like syllables all on their own.
I hope you enjoyed the mini-lesson.
And be as critical as you like! I want to know what you think!

And, yes, rancor is a great word. I'm so glad you noticed it.

And honestly, my favorite part about writing that fic was doing the glossary. It was actually pretty fun!
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Aka -- raped by the god damned suni_need_asagi on March 24th, 2006 07:06 am (UTC)
Awww, kawaii, desu ne daisuki~~~!

I love the Japanese in there <3

So gooooood~ motto! The more of your fics I read, the more I want to read! ;D
Omen-chanomen1x2 on March 24th, 2006 07:17 am (UTC)
Yay!

That's great! Most of the people that read this one didn't know Japanese at all... To my everlasting sadness. Especially since it keeps me from using as much Japanese as I'd like in my other fics.
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izayoi_miki on April 5th, 2006 08:37 pm (UTC)
*sighs*...Is it actually wrong of me to think that Kirito would get in a fight with Rill? *snickers*

Of course, it doesn't matter who's pissed off at who, as soon as one of them gets hurt, the other one comes running. Awww, it's cute ^^

And fluff is good for the soul. *nods* Especially after angust lol
On the 'net I go by either kiriga or tvecklingkiriga on November 16th, 2006 09:12 pm (UTC)
XD I love when Kirito must confront Rill. It just makes a perfect mind-picture -^o^- And if it makes me laugh~ Really, I must note to myself not to read to many of your humor/fluff fics a day. My face is already starting to hurt due to smiling too much :/
Omen-chan: Aoiomen1x2 on November 16th, 2006 09:24 pm (UTC)
I always like imagining that Kirito and Rill have some sort of rivalry over the possession of Jun. After all, Kirito has always been Mr. Protective/Possessive of Jun, and Rill's a cat.

And now that I think about it, Kirito has an awfully cat like personality too.
(no subject) - kiriga on November 16th, 2006 09:30 pm (UTC) (Expand)